ItaSaku - doujinshi - page 4

You compose the panels in a way that is interesting yet still easy to read. There is a good variety of textures in this page but it could have been more cohesive. On a purely aesthetic note, the panels seem to get a bit squished at the bottom so as a piece it would look nicer if they were given more room, or if you gave more detail to the top panels. Also because the bottom panels are more compact they seem darker than the top ones. The story flows very well the way it is laid out. You capture the characters very well.