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Be my uke? - Art trade -

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Art trade with the dear :iconkakuzu1221:
<3 I hope she likes the picture (Lately I'm
liking arabian things so I couldn't help but
put my love into this). The pic took long to
be done! It's gonna be traded with a journal
CSS. Can't help but love the uke Kakuzu,
Deidara is way too cocky >: D
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This pic is just incredible! The bright colors you used really captured the exotic, arabian theme! It makes me feel as though I'm looking into a strange world I've never perceived before... and that's a good thing!

But there's a few nuances I suppose I shall critique. The shading on Dei and Kaku's clothing seems a bit vague... I think you should maybe spend some more time on the highlights, distinguishing the folds. Perhaps it would be good to find a stock photo or something, cuz I'm sure that drawing loose, translucent clothing like this must be *insanely* difficult. I find that in my own case, searching the web for useful photos is a great help.

Other than that, it looks awesome! The lack of visible linework is something that caught my eye, although I think it's a good thing. After all, real life figures aren't framed with black lines, lol! One last thing I noticed was that Kakuzu's toes look just a little odd... the toes on his right foot seem as though they're curled under. Perhaps that was your intent, although I think it looks a just slightly strange. But all in all, it's a fantastic, very creative piece!